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Live don't just be Alive

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#1 cavy_gurl

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Posted 09 November 2011 - 01:13 PM

Silent tears and hidden fears,
That's what your story tells
Eyes that create and imagine
Pain behind those lashes and dreams
Can't you see that we are all drowning?
Underneath everyone lives a lie
Do you even tell the truth?
Do you blend into this society?
We create isolation
We imagine desolation
Think about it.
Sometimes its about how many real friends you have
Not how many you pretend to create
Materialistic bullshit is that important to you?
Do you dream what society dictates to be true?
Needs and wants... In the end what does it matter?
In the end we all leave our possessions behind
Will we be remembered as part of the selfish society that we are?
Or the individual that tried to make a difference and fight against the oppression of hate, war and bullshit that is shoved down our throats by media and government organisations
Take joy where and when you can,
Live don't just be alive
Live and take that risk, chance and shot at being happy
Try to be free for once in your life
Mourn for people you love and know... not people you have only seen of heard in the media
Do you actually care or is that what people expect?
Reach out to another human being
Say hi to someone and ask how their day was

Edited by cavy_gurl, 09 November 2011 - 01:15 PM.

#2 Ed the chow hound

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Posted 09 November 2011 - 01:28 PM

Hi Cavy gurl,

I always read your work, you have real talent so keep writing.

love ya

Ed the chow hound