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#1 tomw1984

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Posted 22 April 2012 - 06:48 PM

In my world

My world is not round
Or made of stone
My world is pretty
My heart it owns

No water or trees
No animals or breeze
My world is living
My world is free

My world can smile
For it has no war
My world dances
With me no more

#2 listener

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Posted 23 April 2012 - 01:00 PM


it does convey a lot of feeling.

i'm sorry that the feelings you're having aren't such easy ones to be with at the moment. but i'm glad that you have such talents to express what you feel. i had a look at your artwork too, just briefly. i'll go back another time to browse a little more. it's all very impressive, your creative abilities.

i suppose you often hear it said that some of the most wonderful art, music, etc. is born from the torment and suffering of the person who creates it. i spoke to a counsellor the other day and he said to me, 'suffering doesn't happen just for nothing. you suffer and grow. otherwise there'd be no point to it.' i smiled when he said that. it seemed comforting somehow.

Edited by listener, 23 April 2012 - 01:03 PM.

#3 Ed the chow hound

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Posted 31 May 2012 - 09:18 AM

Hi tom w 1984,

Thanks for sharing your poem, I like the sound of your world, take care.

Ed the chow hound