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#1 RancidAzn

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Posted 04 March 2011 - 05:36 AM

Not finished, work in progress. Please, tell me your thoughts.

"Iíve picked my needle
Carefully selected my thread

Torn it out of my chest
Taken a deep breath

Through my flesh
Into each beat
Stroke by stroke
It is my badge
No one can defeat

Numbness turns to pain
I am all that remains
for boldly stating
I am no longer afraid"

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Posted 06 March 2011 - 08:24 PM

I liked it. I used to sew for fun when I was younger.

#3 RancidAzn

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Posted 07 March 2011 - 04:08 AM

I liked it. I used to sew for fun when I was younger.

Thanks! Wish I knew how to sew better, seems like it could be useful if I jumped on one of my ideas.